Friday, April 12, 2013

If You're Bad in Hell... Deleted Scene from For Women Only #mfrwhop



For Women Only
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This is a deleted scene from the book For Women Only, an erotic Science Fiction Romance. Khyff is a master of pleasure with a tortured soul. Mehfawni wants to redeem the man her people destroyed. His fragile trust could be a response of love and a healing heart -- or a ruse for revenge.
Warning: this book contains smokin' hot sex, humor, and angst. This combination has been proven addictive. Author assumes no responsibility for the reader's battery consumption in adult toys while reading this book. ;)

Setting up the scene

Khyff is under orders to seduce Ambassador Mehfawni Ruh, or his brother will be allowed to die. If Khyff obeys, his brother will live. All his life, Khyff has been forced into one compromising situation after another. Now, after getting to know Mehawni, he is torn about hurting her. But what can he possibly do? I deleted this scene because it didn't add to the overall story, but I've always liked it.
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"Have you ever been to Kyrenie, Fawni?"
"Kyrenie. Isn't that the firestorm planet? Have you been there?"
Khyff nodded.
"Lucky you! I've heard it's beautiful. What was it like?"
"Lucky? Hmm. Do your people believe in hell?"
Mehfawni covered her mouth. "Yes."
"If you're bad in hell, they send you to Kyrenie."
She gasped, then caught the flicker of a smile in his eyes. They both laughed.
"Oh, I'm so sorry." She slid her fingertips down his cheek and along his chin. "You will never have to go back there."
He pressed his brow against hers. "Thank you for saying that."
She could smell his relief, a sweet fragrance like White Vulits, clean and fresh. "No one will ever make you do anything you don't want to do again."
His scent abruptly changed. He turned his head. Was it that he didn't believe her? Or was there some part of what she'd said that he thought was a lie? Mehfawni stroked her fingers into his hair and drew him closer for a quick kiss. "I want you to believe me, Khyffy." She pressed her cheek against his. "I want to make you feel safe."
With a sigh, Khyff took her hands and rested his brow against hers. "Please. Don't promise me anything. Just love me."
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Where to find this book

Barnes and Noble: http://is.gd/forwomenonly_bn
Get an electronic autograph for the eBook version of this book at Authorgraph


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Meet the Harbinger in the upcoming book Forbid My Heart: A Luc and Rah Story, from Loose Id April 23, 2013. The book will be FREE until April 28th, and its prequel, Surrender Love will be on sale at the same time (reg. $7.99, now $5.99). It's a wonderful chance to meet the Harbinger of the Tarthian Empire.

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Forbid My Heart: A Luc and Rah Story

By Kayelle Allen
Forbid My Heart:
A Luc and Rah Story


Waking in the middle of the night, Izzorah begins to worry. His lover has pledged to take him back to visit his homeworld, but Izzorah knows the fact that they're gay could cause their death if the Kin Pride Council hears about it. Izzorah's heart tells him to trust Luc, but his fear is real. He snuggles up to Luc, seeking comfort.
Luc is immortal. He has the perspective to understand his lover's concerns, and not worry about them. He tries to distract Izzorah with a sexy game of dominance and submission played during their shared shower. Izzorah's unreserved trust and respect make Luc long to wipe out any shadow of trouble or sorrow. He would turn the Kin homeworld upside down to protect him, but convincing Izzorah he can do it will mean confessing a truth Luc is not yet ready to share.
Each must learn: where the heart leads -- follow.
Surrender Love: http://loose-id.com/surrender-love.html
Loose Id books by Kayelle Allen http://loose-id.com/authors/g-k/kayelle-allen.html

Giveaway for Everyone



Thank you for popping in to read today. As my gift, please accept The Tarthian Empire Companion Book, First Edition. This is 23 pages of pictures and info about Tarth and all the other places in the empire. When you click it, this will either offer you a download, or open in a new window, depending on your settings. To read it, you need Adobe Reader, available free.
http://kayelleallen.com/media/TarthianEmpireCompanionFirstEdition.pdf  

29 comments:

  1. Forbid My Heart just got added to my TBR List! :)

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    1. Thank you Celine. I hope you enjoy it!

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  3. Thanks for the freebie, Kayelle!
    I love that you let us see that deleted scene. I'm doing something similar for tomorrow's post, and I was really nervous about it. But I love how you worked it in. So clearly it can work how I want it to. Ha!
    And thanks for stopping by earlier!

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    1. Thanks Kaitlin. I've been saving that scene for some time. :) Glad to finally use it!

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  4. What a beautiful site you have! And Sci-Fi erotic romance? Yum! Thank you for the free read, too.

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    1. You're so welcome. Thanks for popping in, Sheri.

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  5. Love the excerpt and covers You're new one is stunning. Thanks for the freebie :)

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    1. Thank you and you're welcome, Elise. :)

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  6. Smokin' hot sex, humor and angst sounds like a great combo :)

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    1. LOL Shelly, isn't that the truth? It sure fits this book.

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  7. Intriguing, and thanks for the free download Kayelle! I love this hop. Getting to know other authors is always a great experience.

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    1. I love these hops! I've had lots of hits so far, and I'm sure people are downloading the freebie. :) Nice of you to pop in.

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  8. Lovely scene--very romantic. I had a scene in my second book my very wise editor made me take out, but I've saved it too, in a file marked tidbits. M. S.

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    1. I love those kinds of scenes. YOu never know where they'll be useful.

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  9. Hi Kayelle:) I thought I was a member of all your sites, but apparently I missed this one (so now I'm following).

    I've loved all of your covers, but Forbid My Heart...well, it takes my breath away *grins* In a very good way;)

    Happy Hopping, Kayelle *Hugs!*

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    1. Hugs, Kay Dee. :) I think we follow each other everywhere. We should compare notes. Sometimes I go to a site and think I've just discovered it, and find you and six others I follow are already long since hanging out. LOL Yeah that cover is awesome. I love it!

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  10. Stopping by to say hello on the hop. Writing Sci-fi seems like so much fun.

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    1. Thanks Katy. The fun part is creating the world you want. Ironically, that's also the most work. ;)

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  11. Thanks for the freebie Kayelle! You have some awesome covers, I was looking a the sidebar with some of your books, really cool!

    Eva
    evitap67(at)gmail(dot)com

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  12. Sweet, Kayelle! And that Author Alarm is new to me--just signed up! Woot!

    f dot chen at comcast dot net

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    1. Thank you. :) I signed up for my own name to see how it worked, and got the one email the day my last book came out. Love it! This is a good way to remember to grab that freebie!

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  13. Absolutely sexy and powerful. I'm in! Thank you for all that you've done for other authors. Your heart knows no bounds. Namaste!

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